316+Narrative+Fiction

**Task**: Use your imagination to create a Narrative Account Fiction.


One day Lorena, Ashley and I were at the library researching the important people in history, I discovered facts about George Washington, Ben Franklin, Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King Jr. I said to Lorena and Ashely I want to build a time machine so we can learn about history first hand. So we went to the tool store to buy tools and supplies to build the Time Machine. We worked hard to complete the time machine in a short period of time. I decided to name the time machine "The Timer" We programmed the timer to bring us back to 1880. We saw people wearing really weird cloths. Everyone was staring at us; we looked just as weird to them. We walked into someone’s house and it was made of lots of wood and dust it was just one big room with all the furniture next to each other. We then decided to go back to the 1770’s. The first person we met was Thomas Jefferson; he was telling us about working on this new document called the Declaration of Independence. He told us that he was chosen to write this because he was a really good writer. The next day we had breakfast with Ben Franklin. He told us all the inventions he was working on. I was so amazed! We had such a good time learning and living in the past, but it was time to get home it's almost time for dinner. So we entered the time machine and pushed the button and programmed the dial to 2009. OH NO! The timer was not working. We are stuck living in 1770. I was so scared! Lorena and Ashley started crying and rolling on the ground and howling like a dog. We decided to remain calm and try the timer again it kept breaking down. We decided to put our heads together and work on a solution. We started to twist and turn all the knobs. I heard clang, clang and bang then I pushed the button and bam the Timer started. We went back to 2009 and now life it back to normal. I am so happy to see my mom and the rest of my family. Since I am in the 5th grade and we are learning about the Declaration of Independence but I was able to give them a first hand account from because I learned it from TJ himself. By Naishay C



I was so excited that I was going to Texas to visit my dad. My best friend Ashley was coming with me. We walked inside the airplane it was so much fun until the plane started moving but it was worth it just to see my dad. Once the plane landed I ran off the plane I saw my dad standing there waiting for me and Ashley. I ran to him and hugged him real hard. I didn't want to let go I missed him so much... We got into the car and while we were driving to my dad's house the wind started to get strong then wind started blowing and whistling. Cows were flying past us and trees were coming out of the ground we looked around in amazement. I and Ashley looked at each other all of a sudden our cloths turned into a superhero costume. Ashley became Thunder and I became Storm. I told Ashley to fly to the opposite side of the tornado and fly in the opposite direction of the wind and twirl around in the middle of tornado to the stop the wind. My job was to save the people so I brought them to the basement of a building so the tornado doesn't take you away. Once everyone was safe I went to help Ashley. She told me the Tornado was gone, I asked her how she did it and she replied, remember when you told me to fly in the opposite direction of the wind. I flew so hard it stopped the Tornado. So it was time to free the people in the basement I told them that the tornado is not coming back anymore. The next day was sunny, warm without a tornado insight. So everyone was safe. By Lorena A



I invited my friends from school over to my house to play the new video game Madden 2010. So Victor, Sam and Brandon all came to my house after school. We were sitting on the couch playing the game. The next thing that happened the T.V turned into a portal and sucked us all into the game. Me and my friends were standing in the middle of the football field .As I looked up I saw all the players from the other team start running up the field directly at me. I had the ball in my hand I screamed "OH SNAP" I started to run, I yelled "TIME OUT"I called all my friends together and made a plan to beat this other team. So we started to play as a team. As we ran to the goal line we knew we had to make the most important touchdown of the game. We ran and ran until we ended up right back in my living room I'm backing home on my couch safe and sound. By Ian B

_

I've been a superhero at my school many times which made me very happy. But nothing surprised me more when I woke up to get ready for school. I opened the bedroom door and it came right off the wall. I had the strength of the hulk. I became a real life superhero. I started training my powers I jumped in the air and didn't come down I began to fly. I closed my eyes and asked myself "do I want to be a real life superhero "my answer is has to be YES! When I opened my eyes lasers came out of my eyes I was getting scared. I didn't know what was happening to me. The next morning, I was getting ready for school excited to start my new job. I arrived at school and headed down the hall to get my breakfast but right before I stepped into the cafeteria a tiny boy named Victor told me that a someone name Ian was picking on him. I went over to Ian and asked him why do you bully people? He said "it is what I do and if you don't get out of my face I am going to punch you in the face. I told him to stop being a bully because if you don't some. Ian said " I warned you" he then swung his fist at me, I used my strength to stop the punch I made the angriest face I could and screamed "STOP BEING A BULLY" He stopped and I didn't have to use my powers, I used self-control. The next morning I was out with my friends and I saw Ian flipping cars over. I told my friends to go home to safety. I hid in the bush and changed into my costume. It was red with blue stars with a white mask I flew toward Ian and melted his costume of steel. I was not easy because my powers are weakened against steel. I took Ian out of the beat up robot suit and told his mom. He was in big trouble. His mom made him wear a sign that said BULLY LOSER. I am known at school as Mr. Superhero. I stop Bullies. Mrs. Carroll calls me to stop any bulling in school. By Sam R

_ 316's Writing Corner 316 Persuasive Writing Report of Information -316