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__**Persuasive Writing**__
Dear Hugh, I have facts and opinions about smoking and I am going to share them with you. For example, I think you should stop smoking because it is very bad for you. You can lose your friends, family and your life. You can also kill your family if they breathe in your smoke. You get grumpy when you cannot smoke. Think about how much money your are losing because it's expensive. In addition you can get lung cancer and really suffer like the commercial about the guy who has the hole in his throat and he can't talk, he uses a thing on his throat. And if you smoke everyday and don't stop you will die. You are also killing Mommy, Keenan, Jared and me. So stop smoking pay attention to these important facts. In conclusion, you should follow what I’m telling you. You should read the warning label it tells you not to smoke. Listen to me! By Ian

Do You Want to Live in Garbage

Do you want to destroy our earth? Do not throw garbage in the city streets. He could make global warming and you don't want that to happen. I see garbage in the street and I get mad. And you recycle you save trees and make our air good. I want you to know that you don't recycle the garbage stays with us for 100 years and it smells. When it is Earth Day I see people pick up a can, papers and other things lead it always be Earth Day. I recycle at home! I don't like living in garbage. Now we recycle at school to I am so happy. Now you could recycle too! Lorena

Doing Drugs Risks Your Life

Why would you want to risk your life and doing drugs? Drugs scare may so they should scare you too. Drugs can kill you, they affect your family and your friends all the people that you love and love you. You can get cancer and HIV from the needles. Drugs cost a lot of money and is a waste, so you can see for a car. Drug dealers push the drug uses to buy drugs so they can get rich. Drugs can lead to other drugs and you can be homeless. This will give black and stuff with gunk. Which one would be happy to the roads you will not have a future. Say “NO” to pot and heroin. Ashley

Phones to School

I will agree with Mr. Klein's law about no cell phones. In schools cell phones can be used for emergencies only. Students can keep the cell phone in their book bag. You can use the cell phones out of the school if there is an emergency for example if you get kidnapped you can use it to call the cops. It is important to keep in touch with your parents to tell them that you are coming home. Students can call their big brother if someone is bullying them so he can come down to help you. You can call home if you are sick. I know you're not supposed to have a cell phone to begin with in school by if you're responsible that you should be allowed. We need cell phones for protection. Victor

Smoking in Pregnancies

Dear Mom, Smoking is ugly I don't really like it. It hurts the baby and you. It makes you cough I want you to stop. I don't want you to be a really care about you that's why I don't want you to smoke eerie smoking is bad for pregnant women it will affect the baby. It can damage your insides smoking can make your baby short or to be born early. They can be born with a hole in their heart like Stephanie she's a baby and she has a heart murmur close to smoke. She gets sick when breathing in smoke. Conclusion: as you can see that when you pregnant smoking there a lot of things that can happen to you baby like Merman is being born early and short when you're smoking other people get sick from the smoking when they breathe in smoke. On the package it says warning smoking can risk your life. So mom, please stop smoking. Niashay

Smoking Ruins Friendships

Dear Daniel,

I am writing to you to tell you to stop smoking. When you smoke you make the house smell I can ashtray. I think it's bad for you. You'll get a home in your neck like the guy on TV. If he goes in the water he will drown. I also think smoking is bad close you can get in trouble. You will get lung cancer. If you smoke all your life you will die. Did you know you're wasting your money it costs nine dollars a pack and that is a lot of money. On the side of the pack he even warns you not to smoke. I gave you so many facts about smoking if you don't follow them you are stupid. It's your choice, I would not smoke.

Samuel

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