305+Persuasive+Writing


 * Persuasive Writing**

People fight all over the world. People fight for different reasons. Fighting is bad and people shouldn't fight. People should not fight because they can get arrested. For example, four boys were fighting and the police came and locked them up. People should not fight because they could get run over. For instance, Three adults were fighting when a car came and ran a person over. People should not fight because other people can get hurt. An example of this is when ten boys were having a gun fight, but one of the boys shot a citizen. In conclusion, people fight all over the world and for different reasons. Fighting is bad. There are other ways to solve the problem.

By Michael

People drinking alcohol is bad for children and adults. They should make a new law saying no more drinking alcohol. Drinking alcohol is bad because you can get drunk and hit someone innocent. For example, in the news a drunk man killed his 19 year old son and got arrested. Drinking alcohol and driving can get you in jail for a couple of days. For instance, when you are driving and drinking alcohol and the police find you you can get arrested. Little children drinking alcohol is bad. For example, little children can get drunk and hurt. In conclusion, drinking alcohol is bad for little children and adults. They should make a new law saying no more drinking alcohol. The new law would be a good law for people.

By Cristian

Kids shouldn't play mature video games. These games have killing combos, weapons and blood. They can even give you nightmares. These games are too violent for children. Grand Theft Auto IV, Mortal Combat and Naruto are some of these games. These games make violence seem okay. In Grand Theft Auto people kill people, steal money and cars. They show blood and people might find it dangerous. In Naruto they have lots of weapons. I think a child that plays this game might think it is okay to play with weapons. In Naruto there are demons that might make them scared at night. They can have nightmares. In conclusion, kids shouldn't play mature video games like Grand Theft Auto IV because it can teach kids to kill and even give them nightmares. Mortal Combat is scary and kids won't go to sleep. Naruto has a lot of blood in it.

By Christopher

People who do not give other people personal space are rude and disrespectful. People should give other people personal space. People should give other people personal space because it can cause a fight even if it is on purpose or by accident. For example, on Tuesday when we went to gym we were playing basketball me and this boy named Ian. I tried to take the basketball out of his hand, but when I tried to take the ball I scratched him on his face. Then he took the ball and threw it at me. I ran to go get the ball and when I got the ball as soon as I turned around he pulled my shirt and threw me on the floor. Then he walked out the door. That is not showing personal space. People should give other people personal space and stay out of their pockets because they do not know what is in other people's pockets. For instance, when people dig in other peoples pockets they might not know what is in the pockets like if someone has a box-cutter that's open, a pocket knife, blade or anything that might hurt anyone. So if they dig in their pockets they can get hurt. People who do not give other people personal space can cause accidents or serious eye injuries. An example is if your on the stairs or walking on a dangerous street. If you don't give personal space they can push you down the stairs or in the street. You can break your legs, hands, arms and your neck. In conclusion, people who do not give other people personal space are rude and disrespectful. People should give other people personal space.

By Bomasio

Little kids playing mature video games is bad. If they play shooting games and see a gun they are going to try to do it. They can try shooting people. They should not be playing mature games. If they play shooting games and see guns they are going to try to do things like the game and start shooting people. For example, a kid is going to go home and if they see a gun they are going to think it is a game. The games say curses and they are going to start saying that to other people and in school that can become a problem. For instance, in the game there are curses and the kid is going to go to school and say the curses from the game. They steal cars and people kill other people. The kid is going to try to do that. An example of this is when kids steal cars and try to kill people. In conclusion, little kids playing mature video games is bad. There is a law but their parents still let them play it. Parents should not let them play it because if they play shooting games and see a gun they are going to try to do it like in the game and start shooting. They should not be playing mature games.

By Alex

Smoking in public places and indoors is disrespectful. People should not smoke inside or outside in the streets. People should not smoke cigarettes in public places like at a court. I am against it. For example, people like the judge could get addicted to it. People smoke because they see other people do it in the street. To begin with a kid is smoking in the streets and you have a baby in your arms. Your baby is crying and his or her mouth is open. This is cause the baby to get sick. When you smoke it can cause serious lung damage. I am against smoking. For instance, your dad was smoking for twenty years and now he starts to smoke again. Now he's starting to get lung damage and die. In conclusion, smoking in public places even indoor or outdoors is disrespectful. People should not smoke in or outside. People can get addicted and become sick or even die from smoking. I am against it. Smoking can cause lung damage to you and or your family members.

By Darnel

People who smoke near me are very, very rude. People should nhot smoke near anyone because it is dangerous and disrespectful. People who smoke near me are getting me sick, the smoke makes me ill. People who smoke near me can cause my lungs to turn black. For instance, if I am at the bus station and my father says, "Eddie stay here I am going to get a newspaper" and a smoker comes next to me and smokes in front of me that is dangerous to me. People are disrespectful because smoking is a bad habit and children might think it is cool. In conclusion, smoking can be the cause of many problems. People should not smoke. If you do, other people next to the smoker can get ill and puke because the smell of smoke is bad.

By Eddie

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