305+Writing+Corner

Welcome to class 305's writing corner where students will display their writing pieces. //Students were given this picture and asked to create a narrative account (fiction).//



One day I woke up in the woods and my eyes got big. I went into the cave and it was pitch black. I got my flashlight and I ran and ran and ran and yell and yell and yell. I trip over Ms. S. Ms. S and me yelled and ran and got split up. Ms. S lost me. It was a wolf it ran at Ms. S. Ms. S yelled and ran the wolf lost Ms. S and the wolf ran at me. I fell and got stuck by my arm. Ms. S found me on the floor and wrapped a piece of shirt on my arm. The wolf was coming back. Mr. J got there it was enough time he turned into a wolf and attacked. By Naquasia

It was a misty morning. I was digging a hole and suddenly a spirit came and said help me, help me please. I said where are you. The spirit said, come into the cave. When I entered the cave I saw a little girl named Lucija. She said, help my brother has been taken by a greddie. His name is Crisitian. You will see gold pieces. By Michael

One day I found a path. It was a long path. Until I got there I saw a river and a big brown tree and a cave full of sticks. I went in the cave and saw dinosaur bones and a colored X. I started digging with a shovel and I saw a light. I dug until I found the treasure. By Cristian

One day I woke up in a big black cave. I followed the path outside. It was like a dream. It was so beautiful I covered my eyes. The waterfalls crystal water sparkling light blinded me it was like heaven. I washed my face with the crystal water. I went back in the cave to get my stuff. When I came out there was a girl standing by the waterfall. She was the most beautiful thing I ever saw. I went over to her. Do you know where I am? She said we are in Mill Miin Woods. She brought me to her village and there was a chef called Mecoco. I met all of her family. It was a nice place and the people were like no other. Until one day the Wineco Tribe tried to attack. There were arrows flying everywhere. The girl pulled me and said you are the chosen one. I said, what do you mean? We ran for cover. When we attacked and won the war we all yelled we won. I woke up in my bedroom. By Dylan

One day I went inside a cave and suddenly I saw a baby wolf. I picked it up. Then suddenly the baby wolf kissed me. I took the baby wolf home with me, but we got caught on the big huge tree. The cub scratched the tree and we were free. I kept going to get home. The cub was so happy that she licked me again. She loves me so much and I love her too much! I named her Princess. Princess loved her name. Suddenly, a wolf catcher came to get the wolf. I started to cry so hard that I couldn't stop. I tried to stop the wolf catcher but someone stopped me. I said, "Hey get off of me I'm trying to stop the wolf catcher!" So he let go of me but the wolf catcher was gone. "Great thanks a lot" I said. "You're welcome" said a strange voice. "Daddy!" I shouted. "What do you think you are doing, honey that baby wolf is going to kill you" but she licked me and I called her Princess. "You are grounded" "Fine" I said. I ran to my room and cried. "Honey" he tried to stop me. Suddenly I saw Princess. She walked to me and kissed me. We lived happily ever after. By Lucija

One day I went into a forest. In the forest there was a tree with a big black hole in it. I said to myself, "Hum, where will I go if I go in this hole, maybe I might find myself in pieces next to a bear or maybe I might rule the world." I went into the hole and fell into a classroom. I saw a teacher. I thought she was going to be the teacher, but it was me. Mhooo hahahah, Whochahahaha, mohohahahaha. By Bomasio

There is a cave. No one knows what is in there. That hole could take you to another country. Outside there is bright light and trees. Inside there are animals like monkeys and rabbits. I felt like I had walked for 3 hours. It was a long way to go still. There were too many ways to go. I hope I don't get lost. There were people trying to scare me. They were making animal noises. My hands were shaking and my heart was beating fast. I was trying to find a way out but there were many exits. I didn't know which way to go. By Alex

One sunny day I came to this very forest and came to discover this huge beautiful tree. I followed the sand trail into this very cave. Suddenly, I heard a crickety crack from inside the cave. When I heard the crickety crack sound again I saw a light flashing then a puppy came out. I said, "Hello little puppy how are you." I named the puppy Darnel. We have come all this way and the place that we ended up was Staten Island. Staten Island was my home. I thought for a minute and I said, "Oh no I need to go back into the cave to the forest to get my automobile. When I got home I told my mom I found a puppy and told her about the big beautiful huge tree. By Eddie

Links to other writing pieces by Class 305: Persuasive Writing Report of Information -305 Report of Information Rubric Narrative Account Rubric Persuasive Writing Rubric